Inner beauty

by cutytothebuty   Sep 19, 2006


It is the first day of a new life,
I am feeling different but still alive,
I am having those thoughts,
You know those thoughts,
They make you feel right.

Around I see the beauty that surrounds me,
It seems happy but at same time helpless,
That beauty is dark and secrete,
It is forbidden to be seen from the outside,
All you can see are the tears that the beauty is crying,

The beauty is a feeling inside of me,
It makes me think,
Where did I go right?
Is this what was meant to happen?
Or this a simple explanation called imagination?

That beauty leaves you breathless,
It questions your mind,
It asks of you to understand that not everything is right,
That beauty is in everyone,
It asks you to stop and think, is this right?

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    I really enjoyed this poem...keep writting..please comment and rate my poems..thanks..~DARK~

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I read your poem and it made me think.

  • 17 years ago

    by Allen Med

    I love your poem....

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow great piece i really enjoy reading this poem and yeah the idea was great i love all those lines you used great imaginary and although there are I's that other poems didnt want to see it is still great me I dont care of those

    the important is the feelings and the rhythm the flow of the poem

    you really made a good job here
    5/5 and i like the very ending

    geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ah beauty...this poem has a certain feeling that rings about life.
    good work.

    keep on writing on what u feel and like!

    God bless!