by cutytothebuty Sep 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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It is the first day of a new life, |
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I really enjoyed this poem...keep writting..please comment and rate my poems..thanks..~DARK~ |
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I read your poem and it made me think. |
by Allen Med
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I love your poem.... |
by blueknight
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Wow great piece i really enjoy reading this poem and yeah the idea was great i love all those lines you used great imaginary and although there are I's that other poems didnt want to see it is still great me I dont care of those |
by Misstress
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Ah beauty...this poem has a certain feeling that rings about life. |