WAR

by xxmichaelxx   Aug 28, 2006



war is to hate
bombs flying in the open air
killing innocent people meeting their fate
screaming, crying, this is so UNFAIR!

children covering their ears
parents really worried
coming toward are their fears
a war in this country is something they don't need

screaming of guns shooting
everywhere there are blood and fire
once in a while everyones dying
surviving this moment is something we aspire

relatives who went to the battle
families praying for them to be back in one piece
parents not sleeping, they're unsettled
and what they lack is for peace

at last it all ended
bullets, bombs, everywhere, people building up inside full of anger
ashes of the dead people, felt like acid
but they're glad, at least it's all over

this is for a contest

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  • I liked this poem. The word choice anf flow was good. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Whoa! imagery there big time... powerful stuff there bud!! good job!
    =) Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by gabrielle.Xx

    Yeah for sure ill be one!! just let me no wat i have to do.. just so u know i hardly ever sign in here i do like once a week.. if thats a problem let me know!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is great, your a good writter (I'm going 2 reveiw all ur poems now!)

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    OKy I will but I don't know how to find the "my first contest" thing. lol I'll look for it and yeah I'de love to be a judge.