No more tears

by Peyton   Aug 30, 2006


I\'m just not happy anymore,
and i think i know why.
my life is really bad these days and all i do is cry.
my eyes are really red,
and my head is really sore.
it wasnt my soul you damaged,
it was my dreams you tore.
just coz you dont have your own,
you think you can shatter mine.
now you try and put me down,
but you\'ve finally crossed the line.
you must really love hurting me,
do you find it fun?
maybe i\'m not what you want,
but why am i the one?
maybe you\'ve finally accomplished,
what you set out to do.
but have you ever thought,
maybe i wanna be loved too.
all my thoughts are broken,
everythings buried deep inside.
all of its killin me,
but i got no more tears to cry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by haley

    You're really, very talented.
    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Forbidden Curse

    I love this one....it discribes me sort of.
    This one is really good....

  • 17 years ago

    by caroline

    I really like this poem...please check out the one i wrote, u might really like it..good job, keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by skye

    Hey jsut commeting back thanks u wirte good poems to, great poem 5/5

    Sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Lucy, thanks for commenting on my poem. you wanted some tips, but personally I feel this poem is excellent. You have a nice thought about no longer having any tears left and yet the pain continues and you expressed it in a readable rhyme scheme. 5/5!