December 1, 2004

by Raychel   Aug 31, 2006


Words were said,
Bagpipes were played,
Tears were shed,
Apologies were made.

Black was worn,
Flowers were placed,
A widow left,
With children of disgrace.

A casket was viewed,
People were held,
Hate was cast away,
And love was compelled.

Night came quickly,
No stars had shown.
My dad was gone,
And I was alone.

*yes this is true, plz dont give me any more comments saying how much u hope it's not true. it is. period.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by sbrooke34

    Really good poem! i really understood it my dad died too i know what your goin threw

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    I hope this isnt true but it was a deep poem and its real good so keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. such a powerful, and sad poem, you wrote it well, and your rhyming was great... i hope that this isnt true! 5/5..
    Best Wishes
    Please rate and comment on my poems, thanks
    Kirsty Palmer xXx