Shaking Cold

by Jenni   Aug 31, 2006


Does it feel good when it hurts?
I think it just makes things worse.
Dragging the blade across your arm
not caring about the physical harm.
Foolish decisions with sharp and jagged ends
calling your mom's carving knife your best friend.
You've pulled away from all the others
Selfish choices to become another.
Each inch of skin covered with blood,
scars that remind you never to love.
The pain sears deep within
It goes deeper than the skin.

It feels so much better when it hurts,
it makes me feel like I have worth.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's scary how good pain can actually feel at certain times in life, you wouldn't think pain could be such a good thing, but it is 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The last two lines are so so good! they really made the poem excellent! you always need a strong ending. to stay in their minds and make them want more! i love your poems. so so perfect.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Willow

    I know exactly how u feel...ive called the razor my best friend before...and when u get wrapped up in cutting enough...it truely is..u really capture what its like in this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Dragging the balde across your arm
    ((blade))

    I liked this....You were like insulting yourself in the beiginning and switched it at the end...The flow was a bit bumpy in my opinion, but other than that I really enjoyed reading it...

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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