It hurts more than ever

by xkillakellys   Sep 2, 2006


And now it hurts more than EVER
i guess the perfect word me for me and you is NEVER
it hurts me to just see your worldd
that it keeps going
and mine is stuckk,stuck on how i feel about you
theres no explanation to how i feel
i just do
and now u wont realize what u have in front of u..
till i turn around and keep on with life

**this poem doesnt really rhym
it was just to rite out how i feel at this exact moment**

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  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This poem dont have to ryme to b good coz its great!! and really makes sence

  • 17 years ago

    by Freak7265

    Good job!...Even if it doesn't rhym it was still good!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Stallion

    I've been in that situation before i know it sucks but things will get better

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Um.. it was.. OK? yeah. well. Better luck next time.

    -Jennifer.

  • 17 years ago

    by dorky goth girl

    I loved this one! it was really good keep it up!