YOU ARE THE FIRST ONE

by -Usmi-   Sep 5, 2006


I like you so
I miss you so
Youre the first one I know
I am desperate to know
Your lovely smile
Wakes my unconscious mind
Your sparkling eyes
All diamonds aside
The hairs straight, curls at ends
Every time I look a new message it sends
The vision you peep
Your sight is what I seek
The red on your lips
The same on my heart
No distance between
Where ever you are
The dreams I see
Starts with you finishes with me
Words you dont say
A silent message everyday
The flying kisses, as heavy as a rock
They come and hit me just like a shock
Everything you drop
And new hope is on top
May be its for me
May be its not
The rose you threw
My heart it struck
I thought its my imagination
But was my sheer luck
The room you enter
The things you touch
The words you speak
The thoughts you think
Are they the same as others? Never
Can see them change from stem to a flower
The love is in the air
Losing you, a pain I cant bear
I have seen a beauty calm and static
She passes me smile evil romantic
Her eyes sprays love, her lips do the magic
You Are The First One, I am a fanatic

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very nice poem reall shows real feeelings,,,
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Very sweet poem yet again. Quite long, but still got loads of discription throughtout it. Loads and loads of emotian. OIts really great! One tip is punctuation, i think you should of used it much more then you did. It kinda through me off. Still great poem! Keep them up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by miipenguiinsocksrock

    Thia poem ia awesome! you're an amazing writer!! 5/5 again

  • 17 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    "The rose you threw
    My heart it struck"
    I love this part the best this is a very good poem i love

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    Exellent poem 5/5. its uplifting in a way. its a beautiful expression. keep writing