by -Usmi- Nov 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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Once passed can never be brought back |
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Great poem again. Lol. Your work is really great! Again thought i think you could improve by putting punctuation in. Still it was really an injoyable read! Keep them coming! xx |
by Jochsey
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Good work nice poem |
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Nice poem i love it *5/5*!!! |
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Geez hun you are a great writer i love this one! Your work is wonerful |
by Gina
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I like this poem alot. I understand all of it. It's almost as you took the words out of my mind. I love it. =) |