A Sad Good-bye

by myshiningstar14   Sep 8, 2006


**this was kind of an assignment we were given 30 words to make a poem and this is what i got.Thi si rly about me and my now ex.**

Abandoned
dark nights.
Giggling rain,
spears of jagged
winter, hit my face,
like Hitlers love.

Sunflowers
falling like glass,
like oozing icy blood
razoring my weak soul.

Long ago I
dreamed
of peter pan,
and G-I Joe.
The slow memories,
dictating like a
frappe, meeting
your skin; stating
its welcome.

The emptiness
liek murder,
to my eyes.
The fire inside
ceasing.

Part of me creasing,
embedded
with a newer pain.

I thought he was
the one, but like
gangrene, the more
I was "around" him,
the more infected
I became. It drew me to
sing dashboard
confessionals, and
the peace I thought
I knew; that was like
a baby's bottom,
became like mashed
potatoes, mushy.

It stunk like
onions, being far
away; like green
eggs and ham,
which I never
liked. I was tired of
the same old bite.
Tired of being alone.

Slowly my heart for you,
grew cold. No longer can
I hold on.

Like hell it is.
I know we have
to break up.

**i broke up wit john..bc i cant take the distance anymore. i know he'll understand and I'll always care about him. hes amazing. i found sumone else, Dave..i like him a lot hes rly cute.**

LISSA

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  • 17 years ago

    by brittany copus

    I LIKE IT
    - BRIT

  • 17 years ago

    by dorky goth girl

    * crys * IM GUNA MISS JOHNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O WELL I STILL HAVE HIS # I WILL CALL HIM MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOO JOHNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by stargirl49

    LISSA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COME YOU DIDN'T TELL ME?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! girl, you know i would've been there for you.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I can realat this to myself and this is like my life and what I'm going thought but Im not going to brake up with a guy because I hope I can see again and I thought of how life is a battle area and you are aganst fait and fait is winning .