Our Hill

by ellie   Sep 10, 2006


Laying here alone,
with a tear in my eye,
feeling the warm breeze
and watching the clouds float by.
Reflecting on what it was like,
when i had you by my side,
my feelings for you,
i didnt have to hide.
You held me close
and whispered you loved me,
everything was perfect,
the way it should be.
The world was stopped,
it all stood still,
just for you and i,
alone on this hill.
I thought it would never end,
i thought you would never leave,
i told myself this,
i tried so hard to believe.
While the sun was smiling,
with no hint of hatred or sorrow,
while the tress were whispering;
"it will all be different tomorrow".
You turned your back
and pushed me away,
all i did was love you,
but yet you had nothing to say.
My feelings for you,
are still the same,
laying on this hill,
i really wish you came.
Now its turning cold,
as the stars start to appear,
yes im all alone,
still wishing you were here.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This poem was really good. actually it was amazing! i can really relate to it. mine is somewhat like yours. I know my situation was as well. Good work! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Good job, that poem was nicely written!