Loopy

by Esther   Sep 10, 2006


You said i was dumb,
You said i would fail,
You said i wouldn't acomplish anything,
You said i would never learn to sail,

You said lots of things,
All of them stung,
All of them hurt,
But on each one i was hung,

You said i couldn't ever do anything,
But i showed you,
You were wrong,
You say your sorry,

But i can't forgive,
I can't forget,
Neither can you,
So i am here to forever regret!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The poem was more of a venting poem. It lacked clear descriptions and the repeating parts were off but the language was strong and the meaning was there.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Seems like a great venting poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow-excellent poem.....very meaningful, you totally show your emotions.

    october xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow-excellent poem.....very meaningful, you totally show your emotions.

    october xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    That was a good poem, Great job!

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