Black Tears

by The Black Rose   Sep 11, 2006


Black Tears
They are on my face
My hand
Its bleeding
The knife
Its red
My eyes
They are black
My face
Its full of black tears
It gives a sign...
A sign to death
I love that sign
My death is coming closer
Each and every day
I feel the blood
On my arm
Its drowning
Just like my black tears on my face

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  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    I think its quite powerful..

    and prob deserves higher than 4.3.

    however, a couple of flow issues on a few lines..

    but it kept me reading.

    i like the short lines. powerful and abrupt.

    quite the way it should be. =]

    great poem. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Like it mr spike

    can relate

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Very dark...I loved the way you said black tears it conveys a strong image. It definetely cought my attention. u should write more. Well c-ya

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    Interesting...

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    It's so cool that you painted such an image with so few words. It's very dark and dramatic... I love it.

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