On Another Day

by Ike Dizzle   Sep 16, 2006


Listening to our song
As I m alone once again
I don t know why
I asked you to begin

I guess it was you voice
That touched my heart
Or it could be the reason
We re now apart

We seemed happy together
Like it would last
But now that relationship
Is now in the past.

We are still the best of friends
Until the earth passes away
Maybe we can be more
On another day

But for now
Neither of us is at our prime
Maybe it ll grow with the
Continuation of our life time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I'm sorry, but I didn't really like this piece at all, I found it dull and uneventful. There didn't seem to be any REAL emotion within it, and was a little too simple and basic, I think. Once again, sorry, but this is how I feel.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Great work wit it..

  • 16 years ago

    by Tia

    >.>...i'V3 B33N TH3R3
    iTZ SAD..PAiNFUL..&& H3ART BR0K3N
    3SP3CiALLY W3N Y0 F33LiNGZ N3VA FAD3D AWAi
    BUT H3i [F0RGiV3, F0RG3T && M0V3 0N!]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kaylajoanis

    This is exactly this situation with my ex and i.. i know exactly where you are coming from... very good.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    5/5 Love is so complicating and it hurts a lot when it's gone.

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