Darkside

by Corruption   Sep 17, 2006


A jungle, a maze
the same as my mind
your left in a haze
as you wander though life

cobwebs so thick
you cant even see
which path should you pick
either way ill follow

an array of every device
long since been silenced
as your head is covers in lice
and every other pest that inhabits my mind

once you enter you cant leave
you stuck in my hell
as you begin to thieve
and turn to the dark side

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Superbly written piece. It has haunting atmosphere and you created it greatly. Imagery is also excellent. It really deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by RetiCent

    Hmm, this is a very interesting poem with a deep meaning. I really enjoyed the ending, I thought the rhyme pattern helped it to flow to. Great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    WOW!! This was indeed a Very dark poem! I Loved it Like i love all of your poems! Again it flowed well...Liked the ending...and just everything in general! lol
    Keep Smiling

    *DK*

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