Enchanted!!! (Retourne)

Enchanted!!! (Retourne)

Enchanted, is my heart, enshroud,
By you love, your beauty, divine.
I'm lifted up, amongst, the clouds.
Enraptured, is this heart, of mine.

By your love, your beauty, divine,
To heaven, each time, I'm taken.
Enamored, is my soul, with thine.
My passion, you have, awaken.

I'm lifted up, amongst, the clouds,
Whenever, your presence, I'm in.
You resound, rapture, all so loud.
Your rhapsody, I'm just, wrapped in.

Enraptured, is this heart, of mine,
By the wondrous splendor, of you.
You've captured, this being, of mine.
You, I've taken, a liking to!!!

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

As always, your comments and vote are greatly appreciated, thank you.

Retourne: A Retourne is a French poetry form wherein repetition is used, employed. It consist of four quatrains (four-line stanzas), with each line having eight syllables. The trick is though that the first stanza's second line must also be the second stanza's first line, the first stanza's third line is the third stanza's first, and the first stanza's fourth line is the fourth stanza's first.

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I wrote this Retourne in honor of "The Repetitive Forms Challenge:" http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=57725 as an example of and a attempt at a Retourne. Retourne don't have to rhyme, but I decided to challenge myself further by rhyming mine. Tell me if it's a good job at the form, but most of all a good poem