Just one day

by linderrrxo   Sep 20, 2006


I feel empty inside
like something is missing
i don't understand
i have everything i ever wanted
everything but you
your the only thing i don't have
your the only thing that is missing
i don't under stand
how can one thing mean so much to you
when you have the world
i feel like i could give it all aways just for one day one smile
i would give it all away just so i could tell you how much you mean to me and how much i love you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rona

    I like how you expressed your emotion in this poem. A few things I'd like to point out:
    "*your* (you're) the only thing i don't have
    *your* (you're) the only thing that is missing
    i don't *under stand* (understand)"
    just some grammar mistakes.

    Overall, all I like it! Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Pretty unique way of expressing your feelings, loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by danielle

    This is awsome i can really relate to this i enjoyed readin ur poems talent mwa

    p.s thanx for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    Beautiful poem, heartfelt, emotional and most of all it was from the heart and showed honesty of emotion, A beautiful piece, I hope you find that missing piece because I know what it's like when someone means the world to you and nothing will make you happy but that one person- it sucks!!
    beth xxx

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