I'll Survive

by Brittany C   Sep 20, 2006


I've tried to move on,
but you are always there.
In the back of my mind
and deep in my heart.

You left me and I don't know why,
It hurts so bad I thought I would die,
But I am here, I'm still alive,
I look for love but I just can't find it.

You told me to find some one,
that we needed to meet new people,
try new things but it is hard.
I thought you wanted to be with me.

I thought you were the one that
I would spend the rest of my life with,
but I was wrong, oh how wrong I was,
now I think you just wanted to hurt me.

You said you loved me.
That apparently was one,
of your many lies, you hurt me,
and now, now I am so alone.

It is hard to understand
where I had gone wrong.
So I guess I have to let go now,
I will survive this, I have to.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    Wow.. this is so soft. It makes me ponder, and it gave me goosebumps because your tone was so sorrowful, and what you felt is just so big to cover with a screen.. I can feel all :)

    Amazing write, my only advice is to change the category of the poem from love to sadness..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    The flow to this was shaky. But the word usage was decent.. The concept was very well thought out... and it had a deep meaning. It was a good read but.. not the best. Could've been a little better :P But since it's you're first poem I'm not going to bash it lol good write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I thinking that you were the one,
    ^ SHould be "thought"

    Awh, this was really sad and I can relate. I am glad I read this because I can see how much your poetry has improved. =] The flow was good and there were a few more grammer errors up there that I forgot to point out. Although they were only minor so don't worry aobut it. The emotion was clear and the descriptions well done. Keep it up hunny. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Riz

    Since i'm a minor, I don't know these things but man, love some times bite. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    This was a pretty good poem. I think the punctuation in this poem needs work, it throws off the flow a bit. Other than that, I liked it. easily related to as well. :]

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