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by Audrey   Sep 23, 2006


Mystical interraction
resplendent alchemy of mind
poison flowing through the system
insatiable in its crime

bestowed upon them paradise
they forget to feed there earthly appetite
consumated in a fear of strife
they break before the pause in life

Straying naked in this paradise
cold waters of the north arise
enveloping the enterprise
in shaking ashen faced surprise

Poison leaves the system
frail and ripped from heavens glow
they crawl about for morphine
raped and bleeding on the floor

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  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    Mysterious scenes Youve created here.
    A very good read indeed.

    Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

    God Bless!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Good one. Deep and haunting. Keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by jello

    This is really good. i loved it
    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Wow. just..... wow. Amazing. I loved it. mature and beautiful. once again, fluid and strangely frightening. loved it. beautiful and grotesque at the same time.
    xoxoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow.. vivid imagery.. vocabulary is fantastic, and the emotion and depth are amazing! Lovely, simply lovely.

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