The first in line

by jordynn   Sep 24, 2006

I cant find a place.
cant find a face.
that reminds me of you.

all i have is a song
just a simple song
to remind me of you.

what will i do, now that your gone
i have nothing I'm not strong.

i need you here now.
just to show me how
to live without you by my side.

you said it wasn't worth it
well baby your worth it.

don't hide from my face.
i need your trusting grace.

i need you right here now
i have so much fear now
what will i do when the time comes

the rain falls down
all i see is your frown
looking down on me
how will i ever see

how will the rain stop from falling down
how will i turn a smile from your frown
i cannot turn back time
but i will be first in line

i know that you regret
all the things that were said
i know that you wish you
could see the day i feel too
the day i fall in love just as you did
so that you could re-live
the joy and happiness all around
the silence and the sound

i wish you could be here
to guide me without fear
i wish i could turn back time.
i swear I'll be the first in line...


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  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany

    Again Good Job! keep writing and i'll read every one. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Krissey

    I really liked your title! It was eye catchy and made me want to read and see what this poem was about..thats always good!

    I like your style of writing as well..its like a free style, your just getting everything out and I like how it reads! This was excellently showed your true emotions very well!

  • 13 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Its great! I like the way its written and the flow of it. Nice! Well done and keep it up! xx

  • I really like it
    i know how your feeling
    great way of expressing
    and totally from the heart
    keep it up