Misunderstood

by Brittany C   Sep 24, 2006


Lonely, lost, misunderstood,
Every day it is the same,
She has become lost to the world,
Lost in the shadowy pits of another world,

No one understands,
That she needs there help,
To pull her back out,
To bring her back to the their world.

No one even thinks to help her.
Thinking that she is just quite and shy,
but in fact she is lost and confused,
Trapped in hell with no way out.

Misunderstood by those she loves
because they see only allusions.
They don't see the signs of a
little girl that needs help, they don't want to.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Liliana

    The emotions really shine through in this poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    A lot of heart felt emotion. I liked it. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad. Not your best, though. I'm not really sure what to say; I just didn't feel this poem.
    May I suggest trying rhyming... maybe that'll make the flow seem smoother.
    Sorry.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by Darcie

    I liked it. It souned like it came from your heart. Good Job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I LIKED UR POEM SO MUCH..IT HAD A VERY DEEP MEANIN INSIDE..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..5/5
    SHAYMAA..

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