Excellent poem! You always, always amaze me with your new poems. Your words are so enchanting and beautiful, and the same time they could be deep and full of sorrow. My favorite lines were:

They don't know how the rain sings my name
They don't know how the dark kiss my heart
All they see is a mirror, an obscene clone
With enough smiles to play her part

I was absolutely awestruck by these words. I've read them over and over and I still can't get enough of it. Keep up your wonderful work! 5/5

Amazing poem but I'm afraid knowing the way the site is it might end up being down voted. Your vocab was great and there were some unique descriptions.

Hey this poem is truly so well written, you have done a very wonderful job with your magic words. it is so amazing.I specially love the stanza
All I need, is some truth, some love from high up
Some strength to start up my engine again
To brace myself against the falling steps
Some hopeful omen to tell me when

so great, 5/5

This dark poem reflects delightful imagery in revealing metaphors with a cocise flow of what they don't know

Where can I hide my mourning confusion

^^ I learned who to turn to when I was back in my past asking that question..I learned to turn to God..when I gave my time to him things turned around for the better ...keep praying about the situations your going through and have faith behind your prayers that he'll pull you through!!

I loved the ending..I was unsure where you were going with this with the whole moonlight thing but that was such a perfect ending I loved it!
Keep up the great work!!
Krissey

Very nicely done, Noni. I have one small suggestion though...

"dark kiss my heart" ...I thought this line could work better if you wrote "kisses" ..It's up to you though.

Awesome job, Noni. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow, im pretty much speachless.
"They don't know the chains around my mind"
Amazing. that line is my favorite so deep and dark. Just beautiful!

Amberinaa*

I loved this. But I am speechless. there isn't much you can say about a poem that is written perfectly. the flow and rhythm was perfect. you wrote this wonderfully. justttt wonderfully. great topic. definitely 5/5

Ah magnifen!t, I gave you two thums up!
I have to add this one to my favourite poems.
(loved the ending)

God Bless!

Great poem as always! I loved the imagery and wording, good work!

"They don't know how the rain sings my name"

Gahh.. that was a beautiful line!.. Wow, I am impressed by this one Noni, or maybe it's because I haven't read some of your poems in a while. I really enjoyed this! Amazing write, I loved that line, the imagery was excellent. Great ending as well.

Wow, that was amazing Noni! The flow was great, the emotion was clear and powerful, and the descriptions were excellent! There was so much detail in this poem, it was a pleasure to read.. Wonderful work! 5/5

Wow awsome!! i liked it alot!! keep on writing!!

I like it "runs away to the woods to live in darkness forever". the rhythm confused me a little but aside from that great job.

I loved this poem,,it had a nice dark touch to it and it was very well worded.
I loved the ending, it was the perfect way to end the poem, and the flow was beautiful=D

This poem is so complicated... so full of meaning... so sorrowful...I do hope it is written on personal experiance!

Noni, your work is amazing. This poem was well written. I thought your wording, and the type of poem was amazing. I can't help but want to read it more than once. =]

Wow...i really enjoyed this. 5/5

Very great job on this. It flowed very well. And I Love the way that you described everything. It was very beautifully written. Great job! 5/5

Some strength to start up my engine again
((Very poor lines, for me..Sorry.))

I really loved this poem... The imagery in it was amazing..You have such a way with words! The beauty within this poem is simply amazing. You tell such stories with dumbfounding grace. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5