Why did you leave..

by The Lonely Rose   Sep 25, 2006


Holding on to to a tiny mental picture
Wishing to see your beautiful face once more..
Why can't I see you anymore
Why can't I hear you anymore
Where are you...
Why can't I talk to you..
Why did you leave..

Did you know that I loved you..
Did you know I couldn't live without you..
Did you know you saved me from darkness that I could have became..
Did you know that you were my world..
My life..

But why did you make me crash?
Why did you make me see the darkness once more?
Why did you make me cut..

Why did you leave this Earth...

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Did something happened that i think i can help you?

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Different type of writing you have here which is in my opinion,Effective.
    a 5/5 for sure.

    Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Another well penned poem! it had emotions it in, and came straight from the heart!

    Keep it up!

    Thanks for the comment on my poems it means alot to me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow sweet and sad poem.. i can feel the emtotion this was so sweet i can relate at the same time... beautiful job5/5

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