Secret

by Maiya   Sep 26, 2006


You love me unconditionally
I know without a doubt,
But society will never know with what you can do without.

At times I feel you're hooked to me just like a ball and chain,
You can't subdue your feelings I know they are driving you insane.

My best friend for life you will stay my number 10,
Forever I will keep your secret buried deep within.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Again...wow. You have a lot of talent.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This poem shows true friendship and i give it a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    A good piece of work. I like the style and wording, you hav talent, although I do see much more potential in the way you write.
    Keep 'em coming
    Ash

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a wonderful poem! You give the description of a very wonderful friendship. This was an excellent write and your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

    Hugs
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Excellent. 5/5 you deserve no less. You rhyming that you put, it flowed smoothly with the poem, story of the poem- excellent. my favorite part is:

    At times I feel you're hooked to me just like a ball and chain,
    You can't subdue your feelings I know they are driving you insane.

    Great Job! 5/5

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