Death. [Lanturne]

by Megann Lee   Sep 27, 2006


-------Dead
------Children
----Lay around
--Murdered tears
--------Die

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A Lanturne is a japanese form of writing with the syllable flow 1.2.3.4.1 It forms the shape of a japanese lanturne.

P.S Down voters, bite me. OK? :]
You and your leaving of low votes and no comment why. Ticks me off. So don't fuxing vote if you don't want to leave a comment. OK?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nyx

    Wow if u place in some thought it really shows the vileness of the world

  • 19 years ago

    by jade walters

    Thats very good... have a read of mine please and vote and leave a comment please jade walters

  • 19 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Never heard of that type of poem b4 but you did a good job... disturbing but to the bone girl!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    Loved the way you conveyed darkness in the poem. nice 1

  • 19 years ago

    by V a n i t y V e i n 6 9

    Exellent dark poem. Just as good as mine.

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