My sister, my angel

by MoreThanLove   Sep 29, 2006


My sister, my angel,
Youâ??re making me lose sleep
My angel, my savior,
Youâ??re not suppose to make me weep
My savior, my idol,
Youâ??re lying next to me
My idol, my precious,
Youâ??ve been put under lock and key
My precious, my only,
Youâ??re sitting with me here
My only, my lovely,
But you mind is no where near.

This is for my big sister in hospital who has bipolar, bulimia and psychosis and was raped 3 times. Please comment it means a lot to me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so sad.i love it.im sorry this happened to your sister.must had been really hard.
    but a good poem
    5/5
    best wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by Asingletear

    Make sure your sister sees this, tell he how you feel it will mean alot to her, she is probably feeling reali alone, knowin how you feel can help, it is a reli gr8 poem and is nice to see that you care so much about your sister. keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the structure of the poem
    And i hope things get better for you and your sister very soon
    Great poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

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