A Trampled Rose

by Tawny   Sep 29, 2006


Love is like a trampled rose,
You have your ups and downs no matter what goes.
Love is the strongest word there could be,
Sometimes it could make you feel so free.
I’ve always longed for the love of that kind,
The love that everyone will hopefully find.
Love can be good, but it could also be bad,
It is meant to be, something I thought I once had.
Hopefully, I will actually find true love,
The love that is so peaceful and is as gentle as a dove.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short but very clear poem. Great ending. Your vocab was a little bit too basic and so were the rhymes. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww this is a really beautiful poem. i like this one a lot. you did a really great job writing this. keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey beautiful poem.
    you've done a amazing job on the rhyming. The last two lines could use some work with the flow, though i like the idea of the dove being (portrayed?) as a dove.
    well done, love :] MeL

  • 17 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Aww, i like it. a lot. and i hope you find someone =)

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