On the Roadside

I like the simplicity and pure beauty of this.Well done.It says more than it first appears.I love the ending.

Gary Jurechka

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G.J.

Very nice insight and flow. Great work!

Short sweet flowing rare natural imagery

This was great. The last line though.. "Childhood imagining" ..For some weird twisted reason inside of my head, I think it might work better if you had "Childhood imagination" ..That's up to you though. :]

Nicely done nonetheless. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Hmmm.interesting short poem.
"I found a plant that
Reacts to touch."
"Fronds curl away from my toe."

so much mystery here..
and I like it.