Dont even look at me

by ~_♥SuLLy♥_~   Oct 2, 2006


You have hit me real hard in a sensitive place,
Don't even look at me,
I dint want to see your face.
You said that you loved me,
O yeah sure,
Go away, when I'm around you i fell insecure,
I remember the sound of your voice,
a nice calm tone,
Why wont your presence leave me alone?
You have made me feel awful and i want to know why,
just remembering what we had makes me cry,
I wish my hurt was visible so you could see,
You have hurt me so much.
Don't even look at me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Well, I don't know if you meant for this or not, but the tone of your 'don't even look at me' adds some anger into your poem. I really like this, anger and sadness are the easiest ones to connect with when reading...But going on, you also said you wish your hurt was visible so that it could be seen. It almost adds a hint of confusion into your thoughts, not confusion over your poetry, but the poem itself has anger, sadness, disappointment and (whether you meant for it or not) some confusion. This is actually the state of heartbreak that we all talk about once in a while, which just means no matter who reads this, they should be able to place themselves in your poem and relate. Definately a job well done on the emotional bases. I like it :)

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