Well done

Wow, i dont no what to say...thats really cool. someof its rocky, but the whole points cool.

if i was able to give out a 4.5 ud get that but im rounding it up bcuz thiss poem deserves more than a 3.5

Beutiful poem very deserving to win contest loved it keep up the good writing

I liked it alot...great job third stanza was my favorite. 5/5 keep it up!

Nicely done... very good wording

This is one of my all time favorites! 5/5

This is one of my all time favorites! 5/5

Great work, I enjoyed how it appears simple but really has alot of depth to it. I also liked how you didn't conform to set stanzas or rhymes yet still maintained a flow and kept your writing controlled. Hope to read more from you
:)
- Ariana

*stares speechlessly*
*claps*
5 from me, FANTASTIC work!

Fantastic poem here. It was a very sweet poem to read. You had a great flow and a great choice of words.

Only to find out that it would
C o l l a p s e
At the slightest sound of your name
Tickling my ear, my heart.

^ Great choice of words, here. This was by far my favorite stanza in the whole poem. I can actually relate to this poem in quite a few ways. Wonderful job hun! 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Nicely done, beautiful

It's amazing.you really inspire me.it's tender and very comprehensif.

WOW!!!
GR3AT POEM 5/5
K33P UP UR GR3AT W0RK

Very poetic-I guess that was a no shitter comment-lol

Very good. Relationships can be confusing. I'm confused myself. 5/5!

LOL ur poem was cool and fresh. ^^

I liked the poem very much well done keep it up takecare mel xxx

I love this poem:

Here I am again
Finding myself staying up all night
Defining a crochet of words
Curled in the tendrils of my tongue.

Many a night I've laid awake with words on my tongue.....

Very well done!

Amazing Poem!

Wow, I love it. Your really talented. True love is the best thing you can ever feel. When you get it, never let it go xxx