SORRY

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Oct 2, 2006


SORRY

Wondering what you have been thinking 'bout
Wondering what you have been doing
Everything became hard for me lately
Everyone I tried loving left me
Everyone I tried making happy
Ruined me instantly
I miss you Ryan
I want you here
To guide me through
Tough times
But when you walked out that door
Hope became missing
Sadness poured over me
Depression had drinked me away
And I have forever lost me
All I have left of you
To hang onto is
Letters you wrote
They were like
A song sung to me
They were like
Words spoken to me
Just like if you were here
I feel as if it is my fault
And it is
If I would've never kicked you
Out of the house
You wouldnt've been caught
And been taken away
All I can say now
Is I'm sorry
So very sorry!

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  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Good poem! it was very unique in its style and it made it an interesting read. u defiantely made it to my favs. i have one suggestion though. add more puntuation so the reader knows when to pause and when not to. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    Omg i loved this part:

    Hope became missing
    Sadness poured over me
    Depression had drinked me away
    And I have forever lost me
    All I have left of you
    To hang onto is
    Letters you wrote
    They were like
    A song sung to me
    They were like
    Words spoken to me
    Just like if you were here

    Hell come back soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very heartfelt write you have here,
    its good that you let your emotions out and for sure Poetry is the best one for it

    Keep on writing on what u feel and like

    God Bless!

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