The Stain

by Twisted Heart   Oct 3, 2006


The Stain
By: Twisted Heart

The crimson flow
from the lifeless song
that lay dead upon the floor.
No hope was left
inside this shell
where once the blood was stored.
It dipped it's head
in pain's caress
with hungry hands it pried.
Up from the depths
of hell's own breath
To feast on her insides.
Distant thoughts
of insanity's rot
Have consumed her desire
And left her broken
her words unspoken
to burn in Hell's own fire.
A crimson stain is all
that can be recalled
by those who swore they knew
The girl who dwelled
In living hell
What ever else was she to do.
With gun in hand
She takes her stance
Then she feels the shot
Now just a stain
Is what remains
Of what her heartache brought.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Mother effer this was a great poem. I loved it. It was so sad, and it brought a tear to my eye. For some reason - one I do not know, it reminded me of myself. Because everyone thinks they know me when they don't...

    "A crimson stain is all
    that can be recalled
    by those who swore they knew"

    ^^ Those lines are what had that affect to me.

    I loved it. It was amazing.

    5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a moving and sad poem...very sad. Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This poem was incredible. I think that the word usage really drew a vivid picture and you did a wonderful job with it. Thanks for the good read!5/5!
    ~Jules