Heart broken.

by reborn   Oct 3, 2006


I feel so sad Lord
Like I lost a part of my world
I never saw it coming
And now I'm really panicking
Cuz it's getting pretty obvious
That this crisis is really serious
Each time I think about this
I fall in an abyss
There's no understanding to it
She just asks me to deal with it
All this hurt and frustration
Brings me to a state of depression
This situation is litteraly killing me
There is too much suffering within me
I'm living a daily torture
Because she doesn't love me anymore.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    I really like this poem .... it's short but it gets the point across, also I couldn't help but deeply relate. Anyways good work and I really enjoyed your poems ... all of them!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Awww this poem is sooo sad. I love it! lol...Well, here's the thing: Im not too good at explaining and analyzing-but i can just tell you how i felt about ur poem. good enough??lol hopefully. -- The poem was amazing, as if she didn't really care that you were suffering bcuz you needed her. Especially got that feeling at the end of the poem. I LOVE YOU LOL TAKE CARE..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    This is an amazing piece of work, i felt as if i was going through it myself. you have a real awesome talent! 5/5.

    -Jessyka-

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Im not going to pretend like i understand but i totally feel ur pain. btw God is always listening and there is nothing u can do to make him love u more and there is nothing u can do to make him love u less.

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Its SOOO hard when she leaves, but even tho god may not be lisning an angel alwasy is :) 99/5

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