Nothing Left

by Bradley Peter   Oct 3, 2006


I've got nothing left to give
Nor anything left to share
I've given up on life completely
And I've lost the will to care

I've got no more tears to cry
There's no more smiles to see
Now when you look my way
You won't see the real me

Now all you'll see is a shell
A hollow shell, empty inside
My eyes will seem so dead
From all the tears I've cried

I've got nothing left to say
Except the end of this spell
Now when you hear me speak
It will be the speech of my shell

*sorry if it's crap, I'm trying fight off writer's block*

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  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    I disagree with this being crap.. I think it is another excellent poem, and is so true.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! This poem is not crap!!! It's awesome! It's really well written! Keep writing . . .
    *Just Lisa*

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice way to break the writer's block.

    My eyes will seem so dead
    From all the tears I've cried

    I loved this line because it's true...eyes always seem so dead after you've cried really hard. Good Job! Jpoet*

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