Nothingness

by envy   Oct 5, 2006


Nothing but white anymore
you've given up in most things
the mind of you is no longer you
white emptiness'. lines your soul
fear of being over-run by thoughts unknown

silently sounds everything now
useless, unfaithful, un-loyal
loneness!
giving into the nothingness of white

the needles falling,
one so subtle stands out
its yours, life's essential
falling fast and hits the dark

the point tipped with nothingness
takes over spreading from a single point
white begins to flood, darkness is soaked
life begins to scream

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  • 16 years ago

    by envy

    Ya by far i think this is my favorite poem i have done cuz the rest suck

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. loved the end:

    The point tipped with nothingness
    takes over spreading from a single point
    white begins to flood, darkness is soaked
    life begins to scream

    i honestly could see this. it seems almost like the creation of the world would be like this. almost

  • 17 years ago

    by Scream_my_name

    The point tipped with nothingness
    takes over spreading from a single point
    white begins to flood, darkness is soaked
    life begins to scream

    wow thats deep.

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    The part about ' white emptiness' was the best. Two words with such impact. Such description. It's very unusual, and thats what makes a poet great. Keep it up.

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