Shadowspoet.

Im speechless ! amazing work! 5/5

A masterful piece...

Oh my god, another one superbly written! Wording in the whole poem is great, and the flow is good too. The final impression: Simply breath- taking.
The most beautiful love poem I read recently.
You're so talented, I envy your poetic skills!
5/5 from me.

For he has become weak and under her spell.
Nevertheless, he renders his joy
To a woman so beautiful, lineal of a goddess indeed.

Bleedeth his veins they shall
To see her walk the purest of heaven's dreams.
No regrets of how one feels for thee,
Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.

Believe how he loves thee, believe how near
his soul to its doom, he would not grieve
For love is divine, as divine as it can be.
he set his weary soul in flames to please.

No honors, no pride, no glory he has inside.
Just his love at stake,
And her free will to decide.
Cut mercy with a sharp knife to the bone.

A fool he may be possibly,
But love laws he speaks with tears,
the love he kept within his heart
For her ever more, his lover....

I corrected a few grammar mistakes. The poem was very beautiful. You did a great job!

Beautifully written poem, great choice of words.
-Bleedeth his veins they shall
To see her walk the purest of heaven's dreams.
No regrets of how one feels for thee,
Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.-
^ my favorite stanza.
Well done. 5/5