Screw Up

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Oct 6, 2006


*Not my best but oh well it was what I was feeling.*

I broke down
I fell beneath the truth
And began the lies
I'm not worthy enough
I'm falling to my knees
With such pain
Lord, please help me through
I cried for awhile
I wiped away my tears
And began trying to move on
I'm sick and tired
I'm falling to the ground
With such force
Lord, please help me through
I still love him
I still need him
And want to have someone to hold
I'm hurt that we're not together
I'm saddened
With disgust that he's with her
Lord, please screw him up

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Helplessness, the most terifying feeling! emotion - excellent, weakness - excellent, i change my mind, this is my favourite! i think (of what i've read) this is your best poem!

    oh, and does that mean i should reserwe you a place in the compitition?

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    HUNNY, KYLE DID SCREW UP ALREADY. HE'S A PLAYER. I'M SORRY HE WENT AFTER YOU AND BROKE YOUR HEART.

    I LOVE YOU SIS!
    ASHLA

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. I loved this! I can definitely relate to this and I absolutely loved the last line. You did a great job on this! I loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Compton

    Hey that was pretty good! Thanx for reading mine, I will try to read some more of yours later. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Wow! that was intense. i think we've all been there at one time or another but i dont think most of us could put it inot words so nicely. great poem!

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