by Kristina Oct 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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My world is falling apart, |
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Wow, great flow and rhythm... so well written... i truly enjoyed reading this keep it up |
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Great poem! i like the rhyming scheme |
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I really know how that feels and i've tried to end it many times but i just can't let go but i don't get it theres not much to let go of...anyways this poem is extremaly good..i love your first stanza |
by X2892
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I thought that ur poem was really great, keep up the work 5/5 |
by Barbara Jean
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I think we have the same feeligns.. 5/5 |