My first love.

by BlueDreams   Oct 9, 2006


It was late Friday night when we said goodbye
I knew right then that my heart would cry
You felt so cold, and it hurt me so
I loved you so much, that I let you go.

A love so true, it felt so sweet
For a year of my life, you swept me off my feet
I tried everyday, to remind you of my love
For I knew you were precious and sent from up above.

I held you every moment, I held you tight
I pray you would always love me every day and every night
But time went on, as it tends to do
And with times passing, I fell even deeper for you.

Your love grew tiresome, it tore me apart
And you broke every promise, when you broke my heart
I couldnt stop crying, it hurt me so much
For I longed every moment, to feel your gentle touch.

I gaze into your eyes, to see only gray
There was no need for words; I knew what you had to say
I held on to you, in the depths of my heart
Regardless of how it tore me apart.

My love still remains, through the betrayal you've done
Messing with my best friend, and having your fun
I stood by your side, though you didn't want me
And I loved you so endlessly.

I still love you, but times mended my heart
But never shall your memory part
you will always have a special place in my heart.
You will always be the first, who touched me so deep.

And in my heart, will I always keep
Memories of you and me, together for eternity
You taught me how to love and, darling
You will always be my first love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This is truly sad. The words really touched me. You have again penned a beautiful poem. Keep writing these beautiful poems.

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Awwwwwww beautiful writing =] its so real and I love poems like this. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Loz

    That is so beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    This was an amazing write, the rhyming scheme was good throughout, tho got a bit forced towards the end, but maybe that was just me, i loved all the emotions that you placed carefully into this poem, im sorry if this is true, but i can totally relate to 'first love's ' being ruined. Inspiring peice, keep it up..
    Please read and comment on some of my poems, that would be much appreciated.. Kirsty xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by kourtney dawn k10

    I thought it was really good, keep it up