Give, Take, and Lose

by Peachez612   Oct 9, 2006


Love shouldn't end
It's even rare to say.
But mess up, parts of your life
Slowly drift away.

Love is like a rose
You keep it from the start.
But when you make a mistake
It accidentally breaks apart.

Love Is like treasure.
Keep it and be fair.
Or you'll lose more love
That you can't repair.

Be careful with the love
That is given and that you spend.
Because if you mess up BIG TIME
You'll lose it all that you had to begin.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Very beautiful :) an excellent poem, great job 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by Regret

    Omfg!!
    i love it
    your one of the best
    i wish i had your talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Tenisha

    I LOVED IT THAT WAS SOOO BEAUTIFULL U HAVE REAL TALENT

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    That was pretty good. It was beautiful... YOU HAVE WONDERFUL POTENTIAL! Keep writing!
    PV

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