Alone

by Peachez612   Sep 13, 2006


Alone, forever,
Silent with no sound.
So very sada
My heart crashed to the ground.

No one to share,
To love or hold.
Now that I'm hollow,
My soul is cold.

I feel so empty,
So shallow, no one by my side.
I sit in the dark
Hold and hold until I cry.

What have I done?
What have I shown?
My life is now hollow,
I feel so Alone.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Maddeline

    Good. I can't relate entirely but you send a clear message on what you are feeling.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chase

    AWWW!!!! I love ur poem!! I feel that way all the time! Dont worry your not alone!

  • 19 years ago

    by Milton

    I know exactley how that can be. I don't like it. We just need to find a new way to make these go away somehow. I liked it, good stuff. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Good poem. I added you to my favorites and could you do the same for me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    That was great. awsome for a 8th grader. don't stop. you rock.
    ~sarah~

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