All That I Am

by Chris Rodriguez   Oct 11, 2006


Here I am
Incomplete
Only me

I don't need anything
or anyone to tell me
That I don't believe

If I met you before
Would things be different
Or just the same?

I'm finding the words
To tell you
Just how I feel

We wouldn't need anything
Besides each other
To live our lives

Sometimes it's too much
For me to think
That I can't

If I just say
Those three words
Would you tell me too?

Forget what they say
Let's live today
Before time runs out

Let's talk about nothing
For the rest of our lives
I would be fulfilled forever

I need you now
More than ever
To show me who I am

All that I am
All that I will ever be
Is here with you
In your perfect eyes

Is this the end?
I need you now
To tell you everything

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh splendid! This was a poem from the heart, i can feel it. Very well.

    "If I just say
    Those three words
    Would you tell me too?"

    i loved that stanza. keeping writing, and never give up.

  • 18 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    I really love your writting you have such good talent and i like the words you use 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ChAsInG PavEmEnTs

    I love this poem!! its so on point for me,
    you use good words its like a little story in a poem form that i can relate to (which is really rare for me)

  • 18 years ago

    by June

    Beautifully written ,very well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    I loved your poem. it was real.

    xx mandy

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