Comments : Desires

  • 15 years ago

    by meg

    You have no idea just how true thi is!

  • 15 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Definetely true.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Yah but this is nicely written its shortly but meaningful keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Misstress

    Short but every line has a world to ponder upon.
    For sure many out there can relate to this one.

  • 15 years ago

    by Alexander

    Amazing too true its crazy you hit the nail bang on

  • 14 years ago

    by Pamela

    Good poem. It makes me think of my life and all the things I wish I could control, but that I can't. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    I agree, and I'm awed by the poem itself. It's so well written, and I love how you express so much emotion in just one simple stanza. Truly beautiful.
    5 from me. ^^

  • 14 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Simple, but holds much truth . Written with little words, but it brought forward what is real . Nicely done`[=
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 14 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Very nice. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is awesome! You really did a great job at rhyming. Your vocab choice was pretty dang good as well. Simple, yet great. I liked it how you described everything.

    Amazing Job

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Its a nice moral at the end of it, so very very true, well writin, quite nice to read!!! hehe ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Allison

    Short but sweet. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    So short yet so true.
    The wording was again a pleasure to read, and I enjoyed the rythm muchly.

  • 14 years ago

    by melly xx

    So much to say in so few words, and yet totally getting the point acoss!
    This poem only speaks the truth, and those who are too blind to see it, well. eh.
    5.5
    good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Tammie

    That, for such a short poem, is truely amazing. There is such truth in those words. You have perfect word choice, and the rhyming is so right for this poem, it flows so well. Very excellent write. =] 5/5 If I could give you more, i would, it deserves it.

    Tammie

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job! The words you used in this poem are wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    I liked this, is was short and sweet but still full of meaning, I loved the idea behind it and your choice of words was perfect, great work.

    --steph

  • 14 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Lovin it. says a lot cleanly, and originally,

  • 14 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was lovely.
    The words used really made the poem stand out, you have so much talent, keep writing
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by lala

    Another great poem, I especially liked the quotes at the end