You have no idea just how true thi is!

Definetely true.

Yah but this is nicely written its shortly but meaningful keep it up!

Short but every line has a world to ponder upon.
For sure many out there can relate to this one.

Amazing too true its crazy you hit the nail bang on

Good poem. It makes me think of my life and all the things I wish I could control, but that I can't. Good job.

I agree, and I'm awed by the poem itself. It's so well written, and I love how you express so much emotion in just one simple stanza. Truly beautiful.
5 from me. ^^

Simple, but holds much truth . Written with little words, but it brought forward what is real . Nicely done`[=
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Very nice. Well done.

This poem is awesome! You really did a great job at rhyming. Your vocab choice was pretty dang good as well. Simple, yet great. I liked it how you described everything.

Amazing Job

5/5

Its a nice moral at the end of it, so very very true, well writin, quite nice to read!!! hehe ;)

Short but sweet. *5/5*

Alyson

I loved this!
So short yet so true.
The wording was again a pleasure to read, and I enjoyed the rythm muchly.

So much to say in so few words, and yet totally getting the point acoss!
This poem only speaks the truth, and those who are too blind to see it, well. eh.
5.5
good job

That, for such a short poem, is truely amazing. There is such truth in those words. You have perfect word choice, and the rhyming is so right for this poem, it flows so well. Very excellent write. =] 5/5 If I could give you more, i would, it deserves it.

Tammie

Excellent job! The words you used in this poem are wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it.

I liked this, is was short and sweet but still full of meaning, I loved the idea behind it and your choice of words was perfect, great work.

--steph

Lovin it. says a lot cleanly, and originally,

This was lovely.
The words used really made the poem stand out, you have so much talent, keep writing
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Another great poem, I especially liked the quotes at the end