What my mirror can see part 1

by just a little girl   Oct 15, 2006


My mirror can see whats really there
Before I have put on my smile
While my face is still bare

My mirror can see my eyes while I cry
Before I have dryed them
While I still feel like I want to die

My mirror can see me in a fit of rage
Before I have counted to 10
While my anger it too high to gage

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  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    Wow...i love it. really well written.
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, especially the concept of the mirror seeing the real you before you put on a front for the world...good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Oh wow. wonderful job on this. its really good. i can relate to it. keep writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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