Together again

by Becca   Oct 15, 2006


He smiled
i smiled
we kissed
he held
i held
each other
he was my world
as i was his
a gun shot
a cry
he collapsed
a tear
two hearts
as one
his soul
left alone
a death
stone cold
heart beating fast
alone
pain
alone
crying
alone
suicide....
together again
hearts rejoined
spirits together
souls as one

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Thats a wierd structure of poem, but i loved it all the same, welldone :) xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I just reread it... AMAZING! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Simple but gets the point through. Very well done. The way you wrote it portrayed the sad emotion well.