Did you ever seem to notice?

by Bradley Peter   Oct 15, 2006


Did you ever seem to notice, all the children screaming blood?
Did you ever seem to notice, men are dying in the mud?
Did you ever seem to notice, families crying in their hands?
Did you ever seem to notice, domestic blood on foreign lands?
Did you ever seem to notice, how the bodies line the floor?
Did you ever seem to notice, that no one really wins in war?
Did you ever seem to notice, that there's more dead every day?
Did you ever seem to notice, these actions now are here to stay?
Did you ever seem to notice, unholy hell is burning bright?
Did you ever seem to notice, that we're marching toward the night?
Did you ever seem to notice, the shrinking of each platoon?
Did you ever seem to notice, we may all be dead so very soon?

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey
    Thanks for your comments I appreicate constructive critism as well so thank you!

    I like this poem i think it is very sad but also very true. You really drive your point home throught this poem.
    5/5

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    My favourite one out of your more latest ones.
    It's original (as always)
    clear
    and has your special hidden meaning...
    Well done!
    5/5
    ~Emma

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Now THIS poem reminds me of your old style. It was excellent and proving a good point! Jpoet*