NO MORE

by Rocky   Oct 15, 2006


No more shades of green
nor sky a perfect blue
no more sun nor light
nor hope so pure and true
no more all i want
when all i want is you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I liked this in an odd way. The lack of words almost made it speak to me alot more then just adding what you wanted. I am not sure if I made any sence but anyway I liked it Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    So sweet, so sad, so short! I loved its flowing-ness (thats not a real word is it?). and I loved the descriptions....great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    A sweet one =]. Another short one, but I like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    Oh, WOW! I really like this one! It's so innocent!

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