Dreams {Etheree}

by Meet Me On Thames Street   Oct 16, 2006


Just
Sitting
And waiting
Watching the sky
Till the moon will rise
And the sun will set down
So that light will shine again
to set my soul free from itself
And awake in it beautiful dreams
Where anything can happen, just believe

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Awww....

    this poem is freakign amaizing...!!!!!

    i just fell in love..

    i love how if flows when you read it aloud & how the wording is just perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    This is pretty good! I like my dreams and some days I wish I could control them. :/

    What a believer poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    NICOLE PERFECT. PERFECT!! U DIDNT MESS ANYTHING UP!! LOVED IT!! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Your syllable count is perfect .
    I find the overuse of the word "and" at the beginning of 3 lines to be a little much though.

    Maybe the 8th and 9th line could go a something like this :

    setting my soul free to wander
    awaken within beautiful dreams
    or
    awaken in it, beautiful dreams

    Just a little helpful thought !

    Wonderful read, thank-you for sharing
    Take care, Luanne

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