Surrounded you

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Oct 16, 2006


**|I found this just a few days ago that I had written a while back. Its about me trying to save my cousin from leaving for prison. But I lost him.. Try to understand it in your perspective.|**

My world surrounded you
Your picture in my heart
Your words as my memories
And your touch as my numbness
If only I had one chance
To say again
"I'll protect you
Through your hardest times
I'll stand in front of you
To watch you sleep
To keep those bad dreams away"
One more time
To tell you everything
Not just a little
Of how you changed
My whole life
"I promise you
With my life
It doesn't matter where you are
Just remember me
Keep me near
Hold me tight
I don't want to lose you
Like I have now
So hold me near
Hold me tight
So I know Im in your heart"

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    GREAT POEM SIS!

    I LOVE YOU SIS.
    ASHLA

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    The beginning was a lil rocky but the last lines were amzing! they were sweet and beautiful. i really liked

    Just remember me
    Keep me near
    Hold me tight
    I don't want to lose you
    Like I have now
    So hold me near
    Hold me tight
    So I know Im in your heart

    it was so beautiful. another great write. good job. 5/5