Not A Textbook Romance

by aDORKable x3   Oct 17, 2006


If you would just give me one chance
I can show you it's no textbook romance

Give me your heart and I'll give you mine
Then we can truly become combined

Give me your love and I'll be your girl
Show me the way to the inside of your world

Give me a kiss and hold onto me tight
You may think it's wrong, but baby, it's so right

Hold my hand and smile down at my head
I promise I will never forget what you have said

Boy, if you just give me one chance
I can prove that this is not a textbook romance

Baby, can't you see, you're the only one for me
Together is the only place I'd rather be

* thanks for everyone who made the corrections.!! appreciate it! **

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwww so sweet!! i enjoyed reading it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Adriana

    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Great job, I liked it. The wording was good and it flowed well. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    I love this one! i can never write this good! lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Your 'name' could almost be part of this poem, lol.

    I love this line:

    I can prove that this is not a textbook romance

    All in all, this poem is pretty good. It's a bit wordy, but the meaning is strong. Nice work-- 5/5.

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