Pointing Finger

by LadyPearl   Oct 18, 2006


*Expanding freestyle; I dare you to comprehand it!!*

What else
While the world spins without cause,
Seemingly ignorant,
Seemingly predictable.
As it resides in glass
A crystal orb that is,
On the edge of breaking anytime.
Crackle, shatter upon our pride.

I thought; no, I knew
Every sinful indulgence protruding
Out the tips of lashing tongues.
Every flashing innocent eyes
Stuffed with knives of many lengths.
Each pulled after a worn virtue,
Stung by the freedom of speech itself.

That can't be true you say,
Freedom is righteous, fair and just.
The laws says so, the law permits so.
You speak blasphemy; you're a cynic,
Borne from pessimistic nightmare deeds.
Ah, but alas, the truth speaks
Death may not be an option with falsified lies.
My lies that is, are but brief verity,
Spoken like the way you wield guns on buckles.

Beware the pointing finger
Glass will pierce without a single drop of blood.
For a nation's pride, you are whipped with words.
You address the facts through the world's eyes,
But perceptions are dull, judged by emotions.
Anything not saying, "Go, Go"
Pertains to an anti, unwanted council member.
Now I speak not only of America that is,
Everyone suffers from this odd incurable disease.
Like it or not,
America's flag and pride shines brighter than others,
At times dulling the new light of many.

Don't point your finger at me
I'm but a simple insignificant child
Why, I pose no danger I suppose
So why condemn me
Why point your impolite finger at me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Hmmmm...I'm not quite sure of the meaning of this poem, but I still love it! Amazing word choice and flow. You have so much talent as a poet so keep writing! =D 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that was great, really blows your mind... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    The freestyle worked! Great poem! Even though I didn't fully understand it, I thought it was very well done. I got the impression that you're the child, and you don't want people blaming you for things. That's what I got out of it anyways.

    The choice of words and vocabulary was a fantastic way to let out emotions. Very well written poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wonderful and very interesting5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    The flow lacks the tension and release., Its kinda hard to tackle the message of the poem, Im very poor at this deep kind of poems.
    I think youve write it spontenously.
    But a good read for sure, it makes me think.